Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Requests for Poems: Rewrites

TOPers, let's see some rewrites! Any improvement?

4 comments:

Nave said...

added the last para :)

Phil Thrift said...

Poems are never finished — just abandoned.

Paul Valéry

Meg said...

i coudn't think of a poem. so here are photos.

steerforth said...

Today - a planned rewrite of a Rabindranath Tagore poem that failed in a way, but became something on its own.